We are learning to write a ‘Moment in Time’ which creates a vivid image in our reader’s mind.
I am shaking what can I do? For my first game I can see bird’s flying over me. I think I have good luck and I do have good luck. Calm down, calm down. Ok yay i’m calm don’t rip my tag, don’t rip my tag. I’m burning hot! I’m holding the ball, someone ripped my tag and I am still running (tweet tweet tweet), everyone is cheering for me. I am Feeling so energetic. I can see players playing properly so I get the just of it. Rip a tag rip a tag!” I’m hearing screaming go Layla from my friends. I’m eating my toffee apple oh no I have butterflies I feel like i’m going to throw up. I’m scared about playing. Oh no it’s my turn. Yay my butterflies are gone. Yay it’s mana wave time now!
